Wednesday, August 31, 2005

with hearts breaking...

the sound of your voice
you might have gifted me that
with perfect reason
~
YOU could have been the one to call me
many fantasies
could that be all we have now?
will we touch again?
~
at

4 comments:

  1. peg15:57

    technically it's Senryu...not haiku. Haiku deal with nature where senryu are a little more open... emotions, etc.
    But Senryu Venue wasn't very catchy.
    Wink!
    Thanks for commenting!!

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  2. Lorena15:25

    didn't know this about senryu and haiku.

    well very short and sweet.
    the last one, we can all relate too.

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  3. Rick Matz22:43

    Very nice. I think haiku is all about capturing a moment.

    Here's something for you -

    Linked Haiku and Cinquain

    Blowing leaf dances
    skillfully eluding me
    I rake patiently.

    We're holding hands
    The campfire is burning.
    No one is speaking.

    Distant
    We resonate
    Over many miles
    She smiles as she's reading this,
    Knowing.

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  4. peg09:57

    Very nice, Rick. Thanx!!

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