tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11188991.post114375438223175798..comments2023-10-05T10:47:55.861-04:00Comments on Haiku Venue: I think she needs a blog... don't you?peghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10251723135967072642noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11188991.post-1144181963437296832006-04-04T16:19:00.000-04:002006-04-04T16:19:00.000-04:00All great but, the last part (Cruel) is superb!All great but, <BR/>the last part (Cruel) is superb!peghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10251723135967072642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11188991.post-1144064048651768362006-04-03T07:34:00.000-04:002006-04-03T07:34:00.000-04:00A Dream’s Lament (mixed haiku and cinquains)(What ...A Dream’s Lament (mixed haiku and cinquains)<BR/><BR/>(What if a dream fell in love with it's dreamer? )<BR/>------------<BR/><BR/>Still holding petals<BR/>A flower out of season<BR/>Pleasant mystery. <BR/><BR/>Longing<BR/>To understand<BR/>Your deepest essence;<BR/>Faithful in my attendance<BR/>Each night. <BR/><BR/>Morning sun dispells<BR/>Mist clinging to cool water,<BR/>Revealing bright lake. <BR/><BR/>Cruel<BR/>Reality<BR/>Mocks my existence.<BR/>Forgotten by morning; only<BR/>A dream.Rick Matzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09699550034693340637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11188991.post-1143877243335575182006-04-01T02:40:00.000-05:002006-04-01T02:40:00.000-05:00Peg u r an inspiration...Peg u r an inspiration...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com