Thursday, October 20, 2005

manage-a-'ku

anguish when parted
gradual evanescense
then it starts again
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our every moment
resides in my memory
most thrilling tableau
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a hot tub evening
thought you might like to know, dear
got some practice in...
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous23:15

    practice, practice, practice...i may have some manuals you could consult to assure maximum effectivness of your practice sessions...

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  2. you're so helpful, bop

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  3. ok so anywaysssssssssssssssssss

    You're leaving us out of the loop again peg!

    *spank*

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  4. I know this may not mean anything coming from a complete stranger posting out of nowhere on your blog but i rather like your haikus.
    oh and i found this blog from and intrest search Anne Rice rocks

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  5. Linked Haiku and Cinquain

    Blowing leaf dances
    skillfully eluding me
    I rake patiently.

    We're holding hands
    The campfire is burning.
    No one is speaking.

    Distant
    We resonate
    Over many miles
    She smiles as she's reading this,
    Knowing.

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  6. sorry, milady
    but I so enjoy the punishments

    and Rick... brava!

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  7. orso,
    thanks so much for stopping by. And thanks for the kind words regarding my haiku, and Yes...Anne Rice does indeed ROCK!
    I hope you hang around.

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