anguish when parted
gradual evanescense
then it starts again
~
our every moment
resides in my memory
most thrilling tableau
~
a hot tub evening
thought you might like to know, dear
got some practice in...
~
hai·ku Pronunciation: 'hI-(")kü Function: noun Etymology: Japanese : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively
... and Piglet hesitates
... and Rabbit calculates
... and Owl pontificates
7 comments:
practice, practice, practice...i may have some manuals you could consult to assure maximum effectivness of your practice sessions...
you're so helpful, bop
ok so anywaysssssssssssssssssss
You're leaving us out of the loop again peg!
*spank*
I know this may not mean anything coming from a complete stranger posting out of nowhere on your blog but i rather like your haikus.
oh and i found this blog from and intrest search Anne Rice rocks
Linked Haiku and Cinquain
Blowing leaf dances
skillfully eluding me
I rake patiently.
We're holding hands
The campfire is burning.
No one is speaking.
Distant
We resonate
Over many miles
She smiles as she's reading this,
Knowing.
sorry, milady
but I so enjoy the punishments
and Rick... brava!
orso,
thanks so much for stopping by. And thanks for the kind words regarding my haiku, and Yes...Anne Rice does indeed ROCK!
I hope you hang around.
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